Part b grammar, punctuation, and spelling errors can alter the meaning of a sentence and mislead readers. spend some time proofreading your draft for spelling and punctuation mistakes. then paste the edited essay in this entry field. (you may also want to make content revisions based on the sample answer in part a. content changes are optional; your main task in part b is language-focused editing.)
it proved indian land claims were unjustified.
native american contribution: the patriots from britain learn how to hunt, fish, and introduce diversity within cultures.
african americans: indirectly introduced the idea of diversity to americans. africans coming to america because of slavery taught white americans that people come from different backgrounds and colors. it also built america's economic stability for a great period of time.
women: make america what it is today. there are some societies that are in the world currently that do not give women the same right we give women here in the united states. because women have rights here in the united states, other countries' citizens strive to come to america, especially women, since they have equal rights in the united states. this is important because america is seen and desired by many in the world.
children: children are our future. we learn from our elders and carry out things the same or differently learning from america's history. we continue tradition and change tradition if it is needed.